In tech savvy era, being vegetarian has been choosen by human being . Most human mankind opine it has pilthora of merits own well being are more significant. Therefore, certainly it would be beneficial towards globally. However,in my honest opinion, promotion of health and prevention from diseases. Which lead towards positive reinforcement. While this trend is more beneficial to some extent. This essay will intend both views analysis in following paragraphs. I would argue that advantages are more crucial rather than its drawbacks.
To begin with, health become an elementary segment for entire world. Which is relatively conceptual based upon dietary pattern.for instance According to Harvest University Research study suggested 70% peoples, who do not preferred to have non vegetarian foods Ranging from chiken, fish, meat, beef, eggs. They had effective immunity as well as slow aging.
Physical, mental, social, well being not merely absence of disease denotes health.
Overall, having fruits and fresh greet leafy vegetables escalate towards healthier lifestyle.
On the contemporary, our ancestors relay upon detoxification process of whole body . They believe that extraction of toxins from blood stream could be encouraged prevention from various illnesses such as hereditary, cardiovascular, neurological.
An article claim regarding vegetation substantially outcome for renewal of cell. Which may lead to profound life. Due to lack of immunity power our body unable to encounter to foreign virus and antigens. Despite of poor well being increase number of people have strengthened mind set . in a nutshell, being eaten several varieties of nutritious foods prompt to prevention of disorders.
Although, majority of individual they have selected to be a vegetarian, yet they are aware regarding cons. To be precise, Which promotes health and mitigate biological illnesses.
- IELTS Writing task 1 Academic 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75444839858 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93634738833 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.718861209964 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4122591344 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7727272727 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04545454545 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126963742331 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318610120269 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288282083617 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0508754468996 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322528441799 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.18 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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