What problems do children face in today s world What should we do to address or solve these problems

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What problems do children face in today's world? What should we do to address or solve these problems?

Submitted by blue_sky on Tue, 01/29/2013 - 01:44

Children are the most important part of each society. There is no doubt that they are facing some difficulties nowadays. There are several reasons for these problems and various measures can be taken by parents to improve the situation.

It has been argued that lack of families' closeness and influence of modern technologies such as internet are the most predominant cause of children problems.Today, In most families woman are working along with man and it is difficult for them to manage time to look after their children properly. Sometimes they are so much busy that they have no idea how their kids spend their time. Internet addiction is also a serious issue children are facing today.They are passing long time to surfing the net which cut the family time.They also sometimes browse the websites which contain violent, porn contents which can have a negative effect on them.

Proper guidance and monitoring are the keys to solve the children's problem. Parents should be more involved in their children's upbringing because it is their responsibility to raise and guide them properly when they are struggling. In addition, it is necessary to observe their online activities closely. For instance, to put the home computer in living space so that it is easily trackable what they are doing in online. Parents can also install software to block the access of violent and porn contents.

In conclusion, children's problems can only be solved if parents take care them properly and observe their online online activities. If they do so, their children will have a bright future.

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