People's character is influenced by the environment rather than Genetics do you agree or disagree?
It is true to say that these days an individual's personality and behaviour is greatly impacted by the surroundings in which they live and not by genetics. I completely agree with this notion because what people see they believe, and most likely they tend to adopt similar habits.
To begin with, the atmosphere in which a person is living plays a significant role since a calm environment teaches patience and resilience. For example, it is generally seen that young children are highly affected by household quarrels which make them irritated and angry all the time; therefore, one's environment is very essential for one's holistic development. Similarly, whether it is a school or a corporate, everyone tries to maintain the decorum of that place so that it gives positive energy to all.
Furthermore, genes have no role in one's character development. This is because no one was taught to do robberies and crimes. All of this is related to the place we are living in, so why should ancestral genes be blamed for people's misconduct? For example, many people have chosen to do thieving, pick-pocketing, and violence so as to satisfy their needs. Thus, societal influence has a power that can make a person do evil activities as well as changed him into a better version of himself.
In conclusion, indeed I am of the opinion that the outer world is mainly responsible for influencing the masses. So they should always look for a peaceful environment to live in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95161290323 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88374963662 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620967741935 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5421251969 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132985154059 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463689219077 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262622490754 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727105303693 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353930902152 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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