Environment problems have become a major concern in today's world. discuss some causes and provide a few solutions.
Nowadays, the issue on environment preservation have become the main discussion topic which is being discussed since last many years. The main source which is disturbing environment largely is human activity and this problem can be mitigate(d) by taking necessary steps which will be elaborated in the ensuing paragraphs.
As overall population is increasing rapidly worldwide which require accommodation area to live. owing to this, national government is allowing many merchants to cut down thousands of tree(S) from forest area and give permission to build vertical houses and cementing road and as a consequence(,) natural habitant is being affected by this development. This trend lead to the global warming effect which directly cause whole climate zone and seasons which are become mixed with each other. Hence, many countries around the world have been facing frequent droughts and heavy rainfalls before regardless of particular season.
This issue can be solved if all governments set together and work shoulder to shoulder. They should rise some volunteering groups and ought to sprinkle them across the world to spread awareness about how to control population growth. In other word, national authorities should promote more medical guidelines which can help to overcome the world population density and as a result there will not need to do deforestation anymore. Therefore, now, government should think about some possible ways through which world population vital statistic can be controlled.
To conclude, although it is not easy to stop human to affect natural environment but this issue can be solved at some extend if all national governments provide their helping hand against deforestation and restrict to disturb jungle area from either purpose of residential or industrial.
- Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments Others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit Discuss both these views and give 73
- Environment problems have become a major concern in today s world discuss some causes and provide a few solutions 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49819494585 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80451281545 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646209386282 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4784494621 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.454545455 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146222727784 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567075809782 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517034443435 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885574711863 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033936624895 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.