Dear sir ,
My name is ABC , I went to the your 5start restaurant in the Toronto branch with my family last weekend. we went there to celebrate my son's birthday and I invited some family friends as well for a small get to gather. as per the police of hotel i booked table 72 hours before. we found some problems on that day, that duty manager was not able to solve so I am dicussing with you.
Moreover, firstly the welcome was to good with greetings and mild music. we were 6 members and we did not found are booked table we had to adjust on two saprate tables. after that we order a chocolate cake for cake cutting ceremony with some candles. Here, the cake was not match with our placed order and it was smelling bad. After that my guest order food and service was not hygenic. waiter clothes was very dirty and dishes was not cleaned. my son's birthday was spoiled.
At the last, i tried to talk with available Manager he apologies but unable to return my money. I would like to request you please send me may money back for booking paid food order. i hope you will understand my side as my respect and my special day become worst day because of your service if possible please arrange a free dinner for my family. I wish i will suggest your restaurant to my near ones.
Your well wisher,
abc
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear sir , My name is ABC , I went to the your...
^^
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir , My name is ABC , I went to the your 5sta...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear sir , My name is ABC , I went to the your 5start restaurant in...
^^
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'your'?
Suggestion: the; your
...ar sir , My name is ABC , I went to the your 5start restaurant in the Toronto branch...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...nto branch with my family last weekend. we went there to celebrate my sons birthda...
^^
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...ends as well for a small get to gather. as per the police of hotel i booked table ...
^^
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ends as well for a small get to gather. as per the police of hotel i booked table ...
^^
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t to gather. as per the police of hotel i booked table 72 hours before. we found ...
^
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...f hotel i booked table 72 hours before. we found some problems on that day, that d...
^^
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... to good with greetings and mild music. we were 6 members and we did not found are...
^^
Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...we had to adjust on two saprate tables. after that we order a chocolate cake for cake...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... not match with our placed order and it was smelling bad. After that my guest order food and...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Waiter
...order food and service was not hygenic. waiter clothes was very dirty and dishes was n...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 446, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... very dirty and dishes was not cleaned. my sons birthday was spoiled. At the la...
^^
Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ns birthday was spoiled. At the last, i tried to talk with available Manager h...
^^
Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... birthday was spoiled. At the last, i tried to talk with available Manager he...
^
Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...money back for booking paid food order. i hope you will understand my side as my ...
^
Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...money back for booking paid food order. i hope you will understand my side as my ...
^
Line 7, column 253, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'become the worst'.
Suggestion: become the worst
...y side as my respect and my special day become worst day because of your service if possible...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 357, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nge a free dinner for my family. I wish i will suggest your restaurant to my near...
^
Line 7, column 405, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uggest your restaurant to my near ones. Your well wisher, abc
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o my near ones. Your well wisher, abc
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34693877551 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14064782075 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604081632653 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2020078906 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5625 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3125 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 2.54639175258 864% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163714769127 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547013939753 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441023634797 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11365524014 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156911288201 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.