some people encourage young children to leave their parent's house as soon as they become adults while others say children should stay at their parent's house as long as possible. discuss both the views and give your opinion.
it is considered by a number of that as in the near future as children are adults, they should get on their feet and leave their parents' home on the other hand, under no circumstances are young adults to be to leave somewhat they can stay with their guardians for as much time as they want. this essay will discuss both points of view and why it is better to let them say with their parents.
Firstly, living autonomously might be a plus factor. The adult generation needs to be work and earn their own bread and butter, this will help them to apprehend the essence of life and money. it will prepare them for the future the basic skills of survival and financial management. Schools in numerous nations train kids from an early age are expected to be self-dependent to become culminated and qualified civilians.
However, lack of basic living experiences may pan out the worst of the adults. A number of a course, pupils leave their acquaintance to live unrestricted in discrete cities as expected by them. this may Jeopardize the quality of living and would be difficult for them to meet both ends. report of 2016, reported the surging crime rates and drug addicts were youngsters who were away from their families and striving for living. Such mishaps can be controlled when the young generation is well-trained and not forced to earn wages until unless they acquire the right skills, till then they are to be under the parents' guidance.
To conclude, although adults are expected to live separately, superficial expectations will do harm as they might fall prey to the corrupt realm and may become perpetrators due to supportive attitudes. In my opinion, the best outcomes occur while we are ready to face the world. it is advisable that with proper guidance and training under parent's supervision young adults will turn out to be assets for society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, then, well, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83800623053 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59938934236 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570093457944 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5657005378 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.928571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228411264877 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674139553646 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781511708672 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148116648776 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115242983743 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.