Dear Sir,
I am regular customer of Amazon services. I have always been happy and satisfied with the products that I ordered from the shopping app. Unfortunately, my recent delivery was not complete so I am complaining you about this and hope that my order should get replaced as soon as possible.
Last week, I booked a Philips Shaving 3 in 1 trimmer for my beard styling. As, you know due to Corona break it is not possible to go to a barber for hair cut and beard trimming. To my dismay, when I received the order the charger of the machine was missing, First, I thought there might be some error on my part but when I thoroughly checked the box it was missing.
A machine without a charger will not work as the trimmer needs to be recharged for at least 6 hours for a continuous half an hour usage. I request you to please send me a new one and replace this one and please see this time all things should be in proper order. As, I belief in the companies quality.
Thanking you,
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 263, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e all things should be in proper order. As, I belief in the companies quality. Th...
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Line 4, column 269, Rule ID: BELIEF_BELIEVE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'believe' (verb) instead of belief (noun)?
Suggestion: believe
...things should be in proper order. As, I belief in the companies quality. Thanking you...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, may, so, at least, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33157894737 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49136458731 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6659207401 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255798680458 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833917059071 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694105469326 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147588119494 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483749725608 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.