Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on young people’s behavior.
Nowadays, together with the developments in technology, it seems evident that many people today watch many programs, particularly dramas, movies, on TV. The programs usually include many cruel or sexual scenes. Thus, there is a controversial issue on whether movies and televisions affect positively or negatively young’s behavior. Exist as cons may, it must be that the visible and cultural media gives youngsters positive influences, overwhelming the adverse factors because people cannot only get along with others but also relieve their stress.
First, movies and watching TV help people socialize with their friends because, due to developments in technology, since many televisions have disseminated to people and the number of theaters increases, it has become one of the most popular means among young people. In particular, according to statistics done by the California Institute for advanced studies in society, most of the visible media occupies its audiences; that is, the young usually talk about dramas and movies a lot when discussing visual literature. Therefore, people can have a lot of opportunities to chat with others, having information about dramas and movies. By having conversations with others, people can learn their communication and social skills. As for my timid sister, for instance, when going to university, she had a lot of ashamedness, so was not able to interact with others well. However, one day, after watching movies and dramas, in her class, a few students talked about the stories she watched; she tried to take part in the conversation, overcoming her introverted personality. By participating in it, she can learn how to cooperate with others. Not had it been for the films, she herself would not have been able to develop into such a sociable and capable person.
Besides, the advantage for watching movies and TV to be a remedial book to learn social skills, the more significant reason is that people will build good health, helping them to work better in the end. Nowadays, competitive due to the employment difficulty and the economic crisis, called Great Lockdown caused by Covid-19, since contemporary society is, inevitable is it for youngsters to get psychological burden and pressure from beat their brain out; this drudgerous situation disturbs the people from focusing and working hard. Furthermore, currently, young people today live alone, do, most of them often feel lonely. The best way for people to recover their exhausted minds and bodies is to watch films. One study that experimented with the possibility of what watches movies or TV helps people diminish their stress shows that can aid people to unwind about their works and the feeling of loneliness. The researcher demonstrated that groups of people who watch movies or TV tend to increase dopamine, known as the happiness hormone, accomplish their affairs well-oiled by recuperating the environment in their bodies. However, without the visual media, give rise the deteriorating situation due to contemporary issues in society gives rise for people to do extremely severe behaviors such as suicide.
Some people counter that movies and TV have a bad leaven on young people. They said that provocative scenes in movies and TV make people follow them. However, people today are already learned in schools what will happen to them, if they follow similar acts as the scenes. This casts doubt on the argument that the visual media is causation for people to do worsen behaviors.
In conclusion, movies, and TV may well give bear on behavior positively. This is because watching movies and TV is significantly valuable for enhancing the quality of people’s life. People can reduce their stress, and after all, when watching the media, people can take their mind off their works and relaxing them physically and psychologically from feeling lonely. The better states help people to not only work more efficiently but also be prevented from doing deleterious behaviors. In addition, they can learn communication skills by watching movies and TV.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, after all, as for, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3443.0 1977.66487455 174% => OK
No of words: 649.0 407.700716846 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30508474576 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.04732388556 4.48103885553 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82612205025 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 331.0 212.727598566 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51001540832 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 1043.1 618.680645161 169% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7968022513 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.964285714 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1785714286 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217488259102 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714424537415 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660346966814 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14054964226 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193070350228 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 165.0 86.8835125448 190% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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