The ancient Oppo tribe has long been thought to have hunted only with wooden spears because none of their cave paintings depict bows or arrows. Recently, however, flint arrowheads have been found among the fossilized bones of ibex, animals thought to be a staple of the oppo tribe’s diet. Since these finds were made on land previously inhabited by the Oppo tribe, it follows that the Oppo used both spears and arrows to hunt.
The argument posits the conclusion that Oppo tribe used both the spear and arrow to hunt the animals. The conclusion is based on the evidence that, recently the fossil of the animal which used to live in the ground of Oppo tribe was found with flint arrowheads and hence it is believe that Oppo tribe used arrows to hunt the animals. However, this conclusion is based on many understated assumptions, which should be assay properly to elicit an apt decision.
First of all, argument states that none of the cave painting depicts bows and the arrows. In ancient time, peoples draw most of the things which they saw, and therefore it might be possible that they did not use the arrows for hunting. Perhaps, wooden spears are very effecting in hunting the animals as compared to arrows and as a result they never had a need to use arrow for hunting. Furthermore, nothing is mentioned about the research that had happened when analysing the things that Oppo tribe used to hunt the animals. On the basic of recent fossilized bones of ibex, which is used to live on the ground of Oppo tribe, author assumes that it is the favourite diet of Oppo tribes. It may not be the case, there may be some other tribes who used to hunt the ibex and since no research is given in the argument, nothing can be said about the tribe’s hunting equipment. If either of the cases is true then the argument does not hold water.
Second of all, argument does not provide any information about the age of the fossil. It might be the case that, even though the fossil is found in the ground of the Oppo tribes, the fossil may got hunted before Oppo tribes comes to live there. So if it is true then the fossil may be hunt by some other tribes rather than the Oppo tribes. Moreover, there might be other staple of the Oppo tribe’s diet, which the argument does not mentioned, which can helps to prove that Oppo tribes used only wooden spears. By knowing the details of only one fossil, it may be plausible to predict that Oppo tribes used the arrows to hunt the animals for their diet. If either of the case is true then the validity of the argument does not hold true and the argument weakens apart.
On conclusion, it may be possible that Oppo tribe used both the spears and arrows to hunt. But as it stands now, the above assumptions weaken the claim of the argument and the argument needs the evidence for the fossil’s age, Oppo tribe’s diet, all painting drawn by Oppo tribes and research to be done for the fossil found.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 457 350
No. of Characters: 1997 1500
No. of Different Words: 170 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.624 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.37 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.082 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 122 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 72 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.389 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.597 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.889 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.404 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.404 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.136 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 278, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
...d with flint arrowheads and hence it is believe that Oppo tribe used arrows to hunt the...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 418, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'assayed'?
Suggestion: assayed
...nderstated assumptions, which should be assay properly to elicit an apt decision. Fi...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 873, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...id about the tribe’s hunting equipment. If either of the cases is true then the ar...
^^
Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...before Oppo tribes comes to live there. So if it is true then the fossil may be hunt ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'mention'
Suggestion: mention
...ibe’s diet, which the argument does not mentioned, which can helps to prove that Oppo tri...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
... argument does not mentioned, which can helps to prove that Oppo tribes used only woo...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 768, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld true and the argument weakens apart. On conclusion, it may be possible that O...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...search to be done for the fossil found.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, as a result, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.6327345309 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 13.6137724551 147% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 55.5748502994 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2054.0 2260.96107784 91% => OK
No of words: 457.0 441.139720559 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49452954048 5.12650576532 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19508539619 2.78398813304 79% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 204.123752495 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.409190371991 0.468620217663 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 641.7 705.55239521 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7766231053 57.8364921388 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.111111111 119.503703932 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3888888889 23.324526521 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.70786347227 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275136685946 0.218282227539 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110084540354 0.0743258471296 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065797205132 0.0701772020484 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199581043769 0.128457276422 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101606800509 0.0628817314937 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 48.3550499002 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.5979740519 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.32208582834 88% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 98.500998004 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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