The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The above process diagram show's the process of converting corn to ethanol fuel.
Overall, The process of making ethanol fuel starts by collecting corn. And it end's up to transport.
To make ethanol fuel at first collect corn. Then store those in a storing area. Moreover, transfer those corn to the mill and then supply a sufficient amount of water. After that, it should be cooked for approximately four hours. Again it should be fermenting for forty-eight hours.
This is half of the whole process to make ethanol fuel. And then after fermenting perfectly it should be separated properly. After separation purifies ethanol in a liquid for five hours. After all, those following again the ethanol should be kept for storing. And after some time process will be completed and ethanol fuel can be collected. Last but not the list ethanol fuel will be ready for transportation. This is the process of producing ethanol fuel from corn. If any process is missed by the maker then the quality will be decreased.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...store those in a storing area. Moreover, transfer those corn to the mill and then...
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Line 4, column 467, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ss of producing ethanol fuel from corn. If any process is missed by the maker then...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, then, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90643274854 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56741797006 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514619883041 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.9656613941 43.030603864 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.4375 112.824112599 46% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.6875 22.9334400587 47% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187673377774 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841733929044 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953488871347 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150538145212 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459009772366 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.2329268293 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.01 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.4329268293 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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