The maps illustrate the development that took place at Queen Mary Hospital in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
Overall, Queen Mary Hospital experienced a process of modernization, turning into an urban area with more facilities. It is worth to note that in 2000 Queen Mary Hospital changed significantly than in 1960 and 1980.
Before 1980, the area only consisted of 4 sectors were the shopping centre, the hospital, the farmland and the car park. The hospital was built close to the main road and next to the shopping centre. Behind the hospital were the car park and the farmland next to the car park. In 1980. the shopping centre was demolished in order to take the place for a cancer centre and a pharmacy. Moreover, the farmland was destroyed and replaced with a nursing school. Also, other facilities stayed unchanged.
In 2000, the hospital and the pharmacy remained unchanged but car park was halved and took place for the nursing school. Furthermore, the cancer centre was extended to cover the entire the nursing school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...farmland next to the car park. In 1980. the shopping centre was demolished in order...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95375722543 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58238571114 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520231213873 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8481640845 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9090909091 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182387306601 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070341404147 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950923472055 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153062181184 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109092714045 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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