Wealth does not necessarily guarantee happiness. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
For many people around the world money is the key to prosperity, and they think the more capital or wealth you have the happier you are. However, while I agree that money might render life easier, I believe that it isn’t a guaranty of happiness.
With regards to the possibility of conducing an unconcerned life, I can certainly state that money is a necessity. Therefore, in my opinion successful people do have less worries than poor ones. They can buy not only the first necessities for themselves and their families, but also everything they could dream of. Nevertheless, wealth usually attracts the wrong kind of people, pretending to be your friends, only to get a profit from the relationship. Consequently, rich people start distrusting even those who are loyal and honest to them, and they end up without friends.
In addition to this I believe that having plenty of money has bad consequences on your mental health, because you always desire for more: you work tirelessly to reach a goal that is unattainable. This can result in stress. Last but not least, rich people usually become selfish and always feel that those who are poor are con artists and after their prosperity.
To conclude, because of all these reasons I personally feel that too much wealth could be counterproductive and certainly not an ingredient for happiness. Were I to become rich, I hope I would be able to keep reasoning as a “normal” person and to maintain the good friendships that I have at the moment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun worries is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...in my opinion successful people do have less worries than poor ones. They can buy no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, in addition, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.890625 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8402171565 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61328125 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0177044153 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109400332925 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392159350497 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349995292764 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660901016519 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327332034898 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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