Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, more and more people prefer teleworking or studying online thanks to the advancement of technology. In my opinion, the disadvantages of this change are overweight its advantages. This essay aims to discuss both sides and explain my view.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that one of the benefits of working and studying from home is that parents and their children could spend time with other family members. To explain this, many adults used to stay at work offices for nearly half of their day, so they only meet their kids at dinner. In contrast, if individuals worked and studied online, they could gather more frequently, which would help minimize the generation gap between parents and children. Moreover, staying at home is an ideal way to protect the environment. This is because a large amount of smoke from cars would decline if the number of work- at-home employees increased.
On the other hand, I think this development could lead to adverse effects on people’s health. The first reason is that although they may have online conferences or classes, they still rarely interact with their colleagues or friends. As a result, many people would be depressed since they have to experience loneliness. The other compelling reason is that the quality of e-learning and teleworking cannot be as effective as face-to-face ones. To be more specific, most people are less likely to participate in the online classroom or online meeting. For example, some students might turn off their cameras and do personal things such as watching a movie or using social media.
To conclude, although there are some benefits of working and studying from home, I strongly believe that this is a negative development since it could affect people’s health and reduce the quality of learning and working.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, so, still, for example, i think, in contrast, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09395973154 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6806179055 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58389261745 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.621895947 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260382687473 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078798236939 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556904080166 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152887272111 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584134724152 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.