It is opined by minority of persons that higher authority should be imposed strict laws against those people who make a lot of noise and individuals are the main factor of this disturbance. This essay has more merits than demerits which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
Commencing with those who in the favor of making laws. A predominant reason is that nowadays most of the individuals constructing huge factories and industries in residential area which disturbs the peace of nature. Also, it impacts extremely bad on city dwellers those who facing respiratory problems and sometimes it leads to death. To epitome, a survey was conducted by Mumbai university in 2016 has reveled that 50% noise pollution puts detrimental effect on nature. Therefore, it better for government to stop all the construction work in urban areas. Moreover, this law is also having one more advantages is it is good for those people who blow the horns on roads without any issue which effects on the nature as well as a number of people disturb from it. If government should hefty amount of fine then it is essential for persons.
Nevertheless, there are few disadvantages of this law. It is not useful for enormous corporations such as clothes factory which provide clothes to customers. To explicate it, if higher authority compose strict law against vast industries to control noise pollution then these companies will face loss. Because they already invest all the money to built industries. If companies will be close that they are under dept. To exemplify, there are 90% of industries which are situated in the cities. Thus, there should be less fine against those corporations who are not obeying the government rules.
To recapitulate, there are numerous advantages, if higher authority makes laws to control amount of noise then it is beneficial for people who are facing health problems. However, there are few disadvantages which we can not ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09316770186 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80250209236 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552795031056 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6794854558 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1111111111 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261906602785 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701524865202 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648660939463 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167927151495 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303918411618 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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