Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports star) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? What other types of jobs should be highly paid?

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Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports star) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? What other types of jobs should be highly paid?

Nowadays, it is of a constant debate whether the huge revenues earned by the entertainment professionals truly indicate their talent. While many people feel that these professionals are overpaid, others feel that their salary is reasonable. From my perspective, the influence of the celebrities over the masses and their popularity justifies their high income.

First of all, fame and popularity of a leading celebrity represent his/her indomitable mettle and painstaking practice. They have sacrificed their time, personal relationships and even health to achieve the ultimate goal of entertain...

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the salary scale of professionals who make significant contribution to the society are often low.
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