Write a paragraph (of 200-250 words) to describe your dream job.
You may write about:
what this job would be
where you would work
which qualifications you would need
and explain why you would like to have this job most.
People may work in multiple fields, and every career can generate money, but how much more satisfying it is to be able to earn while also satisfying my passion. Being an English teacher is the opportunity that I wish for my whole life.
It would be a pleasure if I have an opportunity to work at Van Lang University where have educated me for 4 years. To meet my dream, these are several requirements. The first need is to have a master's degree, so in the next two years, I must finish the Master program and next will be specialized certificates such as Tesol, teacher certification, IELTS, etc. I know it is very difficult, but I can do it.
As far as I am concerned, being an English teacher is very well paid and long-lasting. For other occupations, they all have an age, and at a certain time, they will not be able to continue. For the teaching profession, while you are still having the ability, you can still devote and work. Furthermore, a flexible schedule is a wonderful thing that the teachers have. As many teachers I have studied with before, they do not have to work 8 or more hours per day from morning to night, there is no overtime work. It does not mean that teachers are free every time.
I know that to achieve what I want, I have to make real efforts, because "teaching" is a profession.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-06-23 | jessie1604 | 56 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, still, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47520661157 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85871878099 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9783212175 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3076923077 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144812377846 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463402091831 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515192206713 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745296540986 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377138525145 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.