The information about the usage of energy in an average Australian house and the carbon gas emissions which result from this power use is depicted by the rendered pie charts. The data has been calibrated in percentage.
To begin with, nearly half of the consumption of average energy is by heating, which is 42%. However, water heating use 30% of the energy in the house. Moreover, 7% and 15% of power utilization in Australian household for refrigeration and other appliances respectively. The lowest energy utilizes in cooling and lighting, accounted for 2% and 4%.
Moving towards, the percentage of carbon dioxide released from water heating and other appliances is similar, it comprised for 32% and 28% correspondingly. Only 3% of carbon dioxide gas emissions because of cooling. Although the percentage of heating energy utilization from carbon emission, which is 15%, the difference between this and the refrigeration category is only 1%, it accounted for 14%. 8% lighting energy free from released greenhouse gas.
To sum up, it can be vividly manifested that the percentage of energy consumption by water heating is similar in the household and from released carbon dioxide.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27894736842 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97900781043 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521052631579 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6741331312 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1818181818 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259426095659 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106347921136 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877458603925 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172406647759 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774341336609 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.