The diagram gives information about the developments that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital over a three year time period 1960, 1980 and 2000.
Overall, the hospital has expanded its services by inaugrating specialized centres and other services for the public over the years.
In year 1960, Queen Mary was just a hospital building. It had a car parking zone opposite the building,which was shared by vehicles from the hospital as well as the shopping centre situated just beside the hospital building. The remaining quarter of the premises consisted a green farmland.
When compared to 1980, there had been changes made in the layout of the hospital premises. The hosiptal and the car parking zone were still the same, however, the shopping centre and the farmland had been replaced by new facilities. In place of the shopping centre, they introduced a pharmacy and a cancer treatment centre, whereas, the farmland was replaced by a nursing school.
Developing since 1980, in the year 2000, there were some more changes to the premises. The car parking zone had been cut down to half its size and the other half consisted of the nursing school, which was initially in place of the farmland but now shifted. The cancer centre had now been extended into the farmland and no changes were made to the building and the pharmacy.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: edisontay90
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...a car parking zone opposite the building,which was shared by vehicles from the hospita...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52863501948 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497777777778 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4926739837 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.909090909 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232696903566 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092367954285 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10210959077 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140589538393 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110038607145 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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