Today, on television, mass media has raised the negative side of technology, about the pain, hurt, and conflict it has brought to people over the years. Social networks are being blamed for spreading fake news, fake lifestyles, and keeping people apart. technology, just like electronics… is largely intermediate, how you use it is what matters. Therefore, besides the negative side, there are many good things created from it. I think that technology is not only making our daily lives richer and richer but many innovators and entrepreneurs are also trying to develop solutions to make it help people solve a problem. some of the world's major problems, some of which have been remarkably successful. For example, our use of technology to transcribe and take live notes is making it possible for non-native speakers to join real-time multilingual conversations. They also help deaf children to follow and participate in conversations without being left behind. In addition, technology also helps us to communicate with each other when far away and exchange work more conveniently. Technology also has notable positives to technology, in addition to its pitfalls. Positive or negative partly depends on how you use them.
Today, on television, mass media has raised the negative side of technology, about the pain, hurt, and conflict it has brought to people over the years. Social networks are being blamed for spreading fake news, fake lifestyles, and keeping people apart. technology, just like electronics… is largely intermediate, how you use it is what matters. Therefore, besides the negative side, there are many good things created from it. I think that technology is not only making our daily lives richer and richer but many innovators and entrepreneurs are also trying to develop solutions to make it help people solve a problem. some of the world's major problems, some of which have been remarkably successful. For example, our use of technology to transcribe and take live notes is making it possible for non-native speakers to join real-time multilingual conversations. They also help deaf children to follow and participate in conversations without being left behind. In addition, technology also helps us to communicate with each other when far away and exchange work more conveniently. Technology also has notable positives to technology, in addition to its pitfalls. Positive or negative partly depends on how you use them.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2021-06-26 | quyennguyen | 56 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Technology
...e lifestyles, and keeping people apart. technology, just like electronics… is largely inte...
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Line 1, column 621, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...to make it help people solve a problem. some of the worlds major problems, some of w...
^^^^
Line 1, column 621, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...to make it help people solve a problem. some of the worlds major problems, some of which ha...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, for example, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30412371134 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97676284168 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690721649485 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1705320172 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5454545455 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363375822751 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11934206305 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168028171823 0.0843802449381 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.363375822751 0.15604864568 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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