You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter
• tell your friend what the event was
• explain why you think your friend would like the event
• invite them to come to the event with you
Dear Eva,
I hope you and your family is doing great. I am writing to tell you about the most exciting concert I attended last weekend and I am really eager to invite you to the same. Let me explain you all about it. It was the music concert by one of our favorite singer named Sanam.
Moreover, you would be amazed to know that I booked the front row seat and was able to see him clearly, as well as enjoyed each of his songs. In the event I also got the chance to shake hand with him. Though it was not possible for those sitting in second row. I know that he is the singer, who is close to your heart and you were desperately waiting for his concert to get organized in our city. So, here is the chance for you to enjoy to the fullest.
Also, another important information is that, you still have the chance to attend this concert. The commencement of the concert is on weekend the 3rd July. It has been long that you waited for him. Besides, I have VIP pass available with me, so you do not have to worry about the entrance fee. We can go together to attend his passionate event. Not only we can enjoy his songs we have the leverage to get eatables to our place, that will not make us hungry.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours loving
Urvashi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sides, I have VIP pass available with me , so you do not have to worry about the e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, look, moreover, really, so, still, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21395348837 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07999732906 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613953488372 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4659090583 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7142857143 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3571428571 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240413029338 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889220236549 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452040465535 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135226360988 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524470685213 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.