The bar chart shows the percentage of elderly in three countries in 1980,2000and2030.
The three nation are showing the population of 65 and over to it for fifty years (from 1980-2000-2030) is analysed through the bar graph. Unit measurement was in percentum.
It can be noticed in this figure population of elderly people in1980 is less than in comparison to the prediction of future in 2030.
In 1980 and 2000, third generation was constantly more in Germany than canada and UK. In first year Canada's population was 1/10th which increased to less than one fifth it was noticed in 2000 however, in the beginning UK's population was more than 1/10th which reached equal to Canada's population. Germany's older once population didn't beat by both nations. In first, it was less than a fifth and in next year it denoted one fifth these comparison have showed in blue, pink and yellow coloured
Still, in 2030, Germany's population found higher than other nations which reached at a quarter and Canada's population was nearer to Germany which was more than a fifth however, uk population was approximately a fifth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: didn't
...ulation. Germanys older once population didnt beat by both nations. In first, it was ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this comparison' or 'these comparisons'?
Suggestion: this comparison; these comparisons
...h and in next year it denoted one fifth these comparison have showed in blue, pink and yellow co...
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Suggestion:
...showed in blue, pink and yellow coloured Still, in 2030, Germanys population foun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, still, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93063583815 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67148344864 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554913294798 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 102.055807062 43.030603864 237% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 121.857142857 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0687691711553 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449841047187 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654403403738 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0629080039605 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668638068649 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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