The bar chart illustrates the data of earning and expenditure which was divided by different age groups in America in 2013.
Overall, what stands out from the graph is that, whereas layout and revenue both grew linearly with age, after 45 to 54 age group, the opposite trend was observed. In addition, the people who had aged below 25 spent more money than they earn, and those who aged over 75 had similar in both cases.
To begin with, among the first four groups, the persons who had aged between 45 and 54 had the highest amount of income and expenditure which was almost 8000 and 6000 dollars respectively. The previous age group was almost closed to them, on the contrary, a significant difference was seen at the beginning of the graph. The first age group, while their income was not more than 30000 dollars, they pay out more than they earn.
Then turns to the other three groups, in the graph we can see the income and expense both decrease with the increase of age. The men whose aged more than 75 earned approximately 35000 dollars, whereas in the case of expense it stood equal. The other two groups income more than 50000 dollars but their expenses varied.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, whereas, while, in addition, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64593301435 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2184658264 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583732057416 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9361460363 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.888888889 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104660154903 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519206142503 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0189624754369 0.0843802449381 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740545629914 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00847745395849 0.0819641961636 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.