Taking a break after finishing secondary school could be have an intelligent decision. During that break they would be in chance to broaden personal experiences due to travel or working. I believe that maximizing it’s value people should have a plan in there mind. I will discuss my point of views with examples in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, students decide to take a break after finishing secondary school as they want to explore various kinds of tourist attraction. For example student get study burden during the school days and they don’t have time to travel during those days, so they consider that the best time to take a break from study is before getting admission to the academy.
However, some students prefer to work before choosing higher education as they want to get an experience in the same field, there are go to study but an another reason for this is penury. For example, many students come from poor families and after studing school they want to commence their life independently or they want to help the family economy because of that they take a break and work and earn the money of his/her university tuition. However doing a job in any field has many positive sides, which become a student more mature before attending an educational institution.
To summarise, it is a lot of way to get know about our occupational field on one year break and people become more mature to adapt a university environment
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84337349398 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5413278903 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1084596314 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.6 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18809410475 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685905642685 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476736439122 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10199931062 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548957369844 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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