Do young people today make good use of their leisure time? Or do they spend too much time watching television and playing video games, instead of taking part in more productive activities?
With the growth in popularity of various new types of entertainment, many people have come to worry whether the youth of today are wasting their free time on activities considered to be unproductive, such as television and computer games. This essay will argue that young people are in no such danger.
First, the idea that such entertainment is not useful to children and teenagers is erroneous. This fact is illustrated by the vast improvements made in the eyesight of children who play video games. According to a recently published study, children who make regular use of this technology can differentiate between colors and shapes up to five times better than their counterparts who do not own game consoles.
Furthermore, the modern world is dangerous, and few alternatives are available to children these days. Children who do not have devices in their homes to keep them occupied will be forced to go outside, this will surely lead to them being victims of crimes such as robbery or kidnapping. Their own coach is arguably the safest place for them.
Finally, the boys and girls of today are autonomous beings, more astute than those of the past, and therefore can be trusted to make their own decisions about what type of activity they would like to take part in, and these days most children wisely choose to spend their time indoors.
In conclusion, in the dangerous world in which we live children are correct to choose digital entertainment over other activities, as not only is it safer, but it also has its own benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91570881226 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7288517235 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624521072797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.4636336257 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.3 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229259358125 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743112767985 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665349239576 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111643476056 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753388502449 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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