obesity was once considered a disease of adults,however,it is becoming increasingly common among children.Why do you think is happening?what can be done to help children stay healthy?
Nowadays, several serious ailments are resulted from having body's excesses permissible threshold is so popular that it has been constituted a global issue. this essay will demonstrate the roots associated with this alarming problem and suggest some viable solution .
it is undeniable that the unhealthy eating habit is the principally subjective factor that responsible for the situation. Scientifically, overweight statin human is the ramification of a consecutive process eating excessive amount of calories, which is contains massively in junk food such as fast food and snack. However, the junk food, with its attractively delicious flavors, are being a daily dish in a myriad of people in the world, especially children. Another factor contributed to the exorbitant quantities of people who in possession with a lots of redundant of weight is the surviving pressure. The rapidly escalating living cost in a plethora of big cities leads to the imbalance of working time and self-caring time, as the people have to work extremely harder in order to pay their expensive living cost. Therefore, they can't spend much time on preparing food and doing excercise - a common method to burn calories.
Thus, a sedentary lifestyle is created as well as the increasing frequency of fast food's appearances due to its convenience.
The solution for this problem of the new century is adaptable for everyone. Initially, in order to mitigate the common overweight status among big city's workers, they should balance their life by reducing amount of work accompanies with making more time for recreation. Once they can accomplish that, they can prepare healthy food for themselves and doing exercise more frequently. Secondly, people who suffer from obesity are advised to alter their unappropriate eating habit by a long term congruous diet . To illustrate, the diet takers are obliged to eat low calories food which contain adequate nutrition ranging from protein in chickens breast to vitamins in fruits to lose weight and keep their body energetic.
In conclusion, two primary factors triggered the popularity of obesity are the living pressure and daily unhealthy meals. Fortunately, adopting a healthy diet accompanies with balancing working and recreation time are astonishing efficiently method to ameliorate the problem .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1960.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44444444444 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95205826321 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3201970245 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0790097226493 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254166697735 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344384056963 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0373681400925 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244937702908 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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