Goal of life. Each and everyone must have goal in there life. setting an goal always leads to one destiny. Without any goal human life becomes aimless, have no individual thinking. just raise by another mind set. I agree with the given statement provided.
Young yuth will be future leader of the society. so they must maintain there aim at summit. Young yuth create the new nation, so the must set long term realistic goal. In all sector, young yuth plays important role. In software development, how fast change may happen day by day this all creativity hands to young yuth. setting an long term goal always provide credit in profitable manner.
Even think for personal life, long term goal always pay off you in good manner. If a person have start saving money from his salary, as his salary growing so his saving also growing. It may give him back after 10 or 15 years. At suuden instance if he has some urgency then may this saving work at that time. In not just saving money, there are several thinks person can set for long term. By setting goal for long term person may work accordingly in effective manner.
Considering other factor seeking immediate fame and recognition may fail into success of anyone. Let's take an example if very poor person take ticket of lottery. If an unfortunately he got lottery of suppose 10,00,000. Even though he got an immediate fame and recognition, if falls to attempt in investment of this money.Mistakenly if he invest in wrong way. so people who recognise him will not give him identification. so it may get advarse effect, if you are not able to understood what exactly want to do then it may suffer. so immediate fame and recognition may not stay long lasting. There are several example on you tube or other website, who are famous and got immediate fame and recognition. According to me, They are having certain period after that people may recognise them.
There is another possiblity of fame and Recognition, if some one have really strong in one career. Due to his financial situation he cant fame and recognise, so person meet him and address him in front of world and provide him an oppertunity to show his skills. It might be getting fame and recognition in that way also. again this depends on that person whether he maintain his identity or not.
Furthur conclusion to made from this, if setting long term goal may give you long lasting goal. Which for short term may down you from getting success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Setting
... everyone must have goal in there life. setting an goal always leads to one destiny. Wi...
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...e must have goal in there life. setting an goal always leads to one destiny. Witho...
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...s aimless, have no individual thinking. just raise by another mind set. I agree with...
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Suggestion: Setting
...his all creativity hands to young yuth. setting an long term goal always provide credit...
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Suggestion: a
...creativity hands to young yuth. setting an long term goal always provide credit in...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'severals'?
Suggestion: severals
...me. In not just saving money, there are several thinks person can set for long term. By...
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... to attempt in investment of this money.Mistakenly if he invest in wrong way. so people wh...
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...vestment of this money.Mistakenly if he invest in wrong way. so people who recognise h...
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... exactly want to do then it may suffer. so immediate fame and recognition may not ...
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...xample on you tube or other website, who are famous and got immediate fame and re...
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...and got immediate fame and recognition. According to me, They are having certain period after t...
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...reer. Due to his financial situation he cant fame and recognise, so person meet him ...
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...etting fame and recognition in that way also. again this depends on that person whet...
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Suggestion: maintains
... this depends on that person whether he maintain his identity or not. Furthur conclus...
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rm goal may give you long lasting goal. Which for short term may down you from gettin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, may, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71527777778 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46816037349 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523148148148 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5951375648 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.7272727273 118.986275619 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0909090909 23.4991977007 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 5.21951772744 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213037030534 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601418484426 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567219304316 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116482736589 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528485563201 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 14.1392134831 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 11.8971910112 29% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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