The diagrams below show the present college and its plan in 2025 for proposed.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Presented the maps illustrating the change plan of a college campus at present and 2025. Overall, the place will be retracted more classrooms than with a new completely entrance in the different toward.
Many changes occurred north of the campus; in particular, in the top of map is a garden at present but it will be deleted and become a new erected part of the building. The car park will be extended instead of the footpath area. Moreover, classrooms will be constructed more than 5 rooms in comparison with three rooms now and the school is putting forward for consideration that they should erected to shop area or not.
On the other hand, the old entrance will be moved to the original toilets; likewise, new toilets replace present entrance. Lunch area is still remained in north-west of the map and classrooms in the right and opposite the area will be unchanged. However, reception in the right and new entrance can removed to the present toilets. Both of two rooms in the bottom left and bottom right cam be exchanged together
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... plan of a college campus at present and 2025. Overall, the place will be retract...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, still, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78333333333 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64758800085 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4816678522 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0791827835685 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419388760954 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675486706773 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070585153373 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477978028866 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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