The presented line graph illustrates the amount of water, which is consumed in four towns in 4 seasons.
As can be seen that town C had the highest amount of water usage among four towns whilst town D consumed the lowest amount of water.
The amount of water usage in town C was the highest over four towns. The data of town C made up at 70 in summer , however, in the next season it dramatically decreased to a bottom at just above 10 as same as town D. Moreover, the figure of town C increased to approximately 45 in winter and remained virtually stable until spring. In total, town C used the highest amount of water utilization, at nearly 180.
On the other hand, town D had the lowest volume of water consumption over the whole period. It utilized the highest amount of water in summer at 25, which was nearly three times lower than town C,however, the figure decreased to nearly ten in autumn. Although the data of town D continued to fall to/reaching its lowest level at nearly 10 in winter, it had an increase to approximately 15 in Spring. Totally, the water utilization of town D was the smallest over three towns, which was just almost 60.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e data of town C made up at 70 in summer , however, in the next season it dramatic...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , however
...was nearly three times lower than town C,however, the figure decreased to nearly ten in ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... three towns, which was just almost 60.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49289099526 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54902099049 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497630331754 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5695789622 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284236659527 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137469206495 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732922866783 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214163656534 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399884682926 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.