If a five year old child commits a crime (any kind ), should his/her parents accept responsibility and how should they be punished. What is the age of a child when parents no longer have the responsibility of a child's behavior?
Nowadays,parents should be worried about their children's habits and behaviour and if a crime is done by their children,then it is the responsibility of the parents. In the age of 18 children become mature however,parents have responsibility of a child's behavior until they get married.
To commence, the crime rate in children is increasing day by day due to two major reasons. Firstly, if children do not get their parents support then, they choose to live with their friends. To justify, in this busy lifestyle parents have no longer to talk properly with their minor children. Indeed, in the formative years, youngsters do not spend most of their time with fathers and mothers. So, it influence the behavior of the children. In addition, as children are those who have not fully developed because of education. Middle-class families can not give better education to their children. Then, the consequence is that, in future children will not understand that what is wrong or right for their life and eventually he or she pick to go towards the crime.
However, it is difficult to punish fathers and mothers whose children violate the law. Firstly as partially they have responsibility for what their children happened, government cannot put all the blame on parents because according to the law, punishment us only for who commits the crime or who is an actual criminal , it does not allow to punish their relatives or friends and even parents. Moreover, parents also punish their children if they do bad work because they have rights. According to the constitution of India, everybody have rights like as families affairs, birth rights and freedom rights etc.
In conclusion, parents should take partial responsibility for the wrongdoings of their children, and the age 18 is a correct age for the maturity in children
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07973421927 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91311134524 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538205980066 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4724363289 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.933333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207991583737 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754848987308 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665502336911 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153578777477 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495034915393 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.