Some people spend a lot of money attending cultural or sports events. is it a good or bad thing? Give your opinion and example from your own experience
In modern society , there are widely different schools of thought on the issue of whether it is possible for people to allocate lots of money to ethnic and athletic activities. In my point of view, I am in favor of such a idea due to ample justifications
First and foremost, the expense on sport or cultural events is worthy, as they enable people to unwind and enjoy their lives. Nowadays, city dwellers are likely to be under pressure, they usually use all day dealing with deadlines to keep up with schedules related to their schools or companies. Joining or watching sport competitions and ethnic performances give them opportunities to revitalize themselves which are really essential for their mental health. In fact, their attempts deserve the expenditure on aforementioned experiences. In my case, athletic games that I have watched have positive impacts on me. Standing in the stadium and cheering my favourite athletes make me feel optimistic and have more energy to tackle new challenges.
In addition, the money that people expend on occasions involving sport and culture significantly contributes to the economy. Sport contests and cultural activities bring enormous profit not only for organisers but also for residents thanks to food and souvenirs that they sell for participants. If there are not those events, the economy may partly have difficulties in developing. For instance, in my country, money gained from the travelling sector has decreased since the government imposed the regulation that limits cultural festivals, leading to many financial problems
In summary, sport and cultural events have a lot of advantages, and people could spend money on them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, so, well, for instance, in addition, in fact, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30970149254 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91565014028 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5097678318 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.363636364 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172368702152 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588283095206 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695249062799 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133172199479 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886507506834 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.