Nowadays, some people tend to apply for nonpermanent jobs for certain months of the year instead of having a long-term job, spending the rest of the time on non-career interests. I fully agree with this statement because temporary jobs allow people to earn a decent amount of money and get diverse experience in various fields.
To begin with, nonpermanent jobs provide individuals, who are in need, financially in a period of time. To be more specific, some startups need a small amount of money in a short of time for their projects and businesses. For example, WhatsApp CEO was working for Facebook as a temporary employee for 3 months because of financial problems before starting his company, which turned out to be successful later. As a result, short-term works allow people to earn side income while not having to commit all of their time.
Furthermore, temporary jobs offer opportunities to gain work experience in various area. In more detail, short-term jobs allow individuals to get a better understanding of different businesses, job functions and career paths. For instance, Jeff Bezos was working for McDonalds for several months to acquire knowledge of management and business before establishing Amazon, which is considered one of the most renowned businesses in the world. As a consequence, nonpermanent jobs are the best way to gain knowledge of numerous industries and acquire relevant work experience.
In conclusion, this essay affirms that temporary jobs bring many benefits to individuals. Short-term works may not only help people to support themselves financially while working part-time but also provide opportunities to accumulate work experience in different fields.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: period
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...various area. In more detail, short-term jobs allow individuals to get a better u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40074906367 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02918699537 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569288389513 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1452224915 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.166666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213708262811 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847839179684 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423016737725 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145852804071 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299078217212 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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