In the tech savvy era, people are highly dependent on technology like computer,cellphone, and some robots. However, some experts predict that, cars would be driven by machines in upcoming future , there are. Various causes behind of it, as it has plenty amount of positives except some negatives ,which will discussed in ensuring paragraphs.
To commence with, the first and. Foremost positive reason behind of it prediction is, robotics. Additionally, in upcoming time ,robot will take place of humans, as increasing technology. Nowadays everything possible by technology , people become so dependent on machines. So for that reason scientists can predict , in future car will operate by computers. However , if the car drive by software ,it can be well-accurate ,as it has already installed. Software about map and traffic-signals which operate by satellites .so that, map has a idea about weather traffic is maximum and what are the other ways to reach a destination. Which ,can not predicted by human. Thus, if more cars would be automated then there will not any issue about traffic.
Additionally, another positive reason is , quite time saving and less accidental rate. Moreover, on the long destination journey, people need to drive more so, at that time robotic car become a greater option. As a result, people do not need to drive for long time and this time people can allocate in other works while car perform task of drive. Although, some accidents might occur by humans errors which can reduce by software.so that, automatic car is much better. To illustrate, someone does their office work at that time car driven by itself and one can sit inside and do their work .
To wrap up the discussion, it is predicted that , the future driving system will totally automated . However, automated car very useful for disable people , it is quite time saving and safer then normal cars
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1003236246 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79529149163 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569579288026 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4444592714 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9473684211 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2631578947 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227285158351 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733679584625 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711929184857 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142901682512 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641153983036 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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