TPO 44
This article supports three skeptics who argue about a structure that appears to date back 200 million years. However, the professor opposes these statements by giving contradictory statements and examples. He added that none of the arguments presented in the text were acceptable.
According to the text, the lack of fossil remains of real bees is compelling evidence that the structure was not created by bees. However, the professor doubts this idea, and to preserve the fossil remains on the tree, the structures require a special chemical produced by the trees. However, the trees may not produce this chemical, so the actual fossils could not be preserved until now.
In addition, in the case of the reading section, the absence of flowering plants 200 million years ago is another reason that rejects the idea of bees in that period. In contrast, the professor rejects this idea, arguing that the first bees may feed on non-flowering plants, and then, after the emergence of flowering plants, turn them into a reciprocal relationship between bees and flowering plants.
Finally, the reading of the article states that the lack of spiral patterns in fossilized chambers may indicate that the structures were not made by bees. On the other hand, the professor concluded that although their fossilized structures lack these details, they contain waterproof materials found in modern beehives. Consequently, this argument refutes the last argument in the text.
- TPO 50all university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. 70
- TPO 5 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do 80
- Should high school students wear uniforms? 73
- TPO 39 Independent task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure successful future Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone online games and social networking Web site Use specific reasons and examples t 85
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 11 12
No. of Words: 234 250
No. of Characters: 1198 1200
No. of Different Words: 126 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.911 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.12 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.614 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 91 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 77 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.273 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.617 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.727 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.364 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.364 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.116 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 4