The assigned bar chart compares the proportion of individuals working in three distinct categories between Town A and Town B from 1960 to 2010
To begin with , In 1960 , The highest proportion of workers were working for sale at 41% ,which declined by 21% people in 2010. While , In Town A, The lowest figure was the manufacturing in 1960. Which accounted for 29%. However, the proportion of individuals who worked in manufacturing sector went up at 64% in 2010 respectively. Although, the percentage of people working in services clinched second position in 1960 by 30%. Yet , the figure of services dropped at 16% in 2010 correspondingly.
Probing further , In the comparison of town A , the wide number of workers were working in sales at 70% in 1960 in the Town B . After 50 years , The individuals who did work in sales factor were stabled at first position but it decreased by 23% in 2010. However , The percentage of people in services were maximum around 20 to 22% from 1960 to 2010 in town B. Therefore, The lowest figure of workers seemed in manufacturing field at 10% which rose at 25% in 2010 respectively.
Overall, The sales sector had the biggest workforce in town A and town B in 1960 . However, there are some significant changes in 2010. while, the manufacturing represents the main part in Town A
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80176211454 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93161812025 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493392070485 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.33902439024 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.5670101214 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8461538462 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372866935939 0.215688989381 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135867078686 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869614184459 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248736142585 0.15604864568 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216386886949 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.