In the recent world, health care has been the main concern for many people because of its necessity; therefore, citizens would like their governments to fund more money for this category rather than art galleries and museums. However, I firmly oppose this belief since art galleries and museums would play the same essential role in terms of education and tourism.
To begin with, there is an undeniable fact that allocating financial resources to improve the health care system is a significant action. To bring it further, many third countries would be the easy targets for an outbreak of any infectious diseases because the governments of these countries are not financially able to create an efficient health care program. To illustrate this point, African countries would be the prime example of how lacking of finance would drive these countries suffering from famine and poor living conditions. In addition to that, the same situation could also happen with developed countries if the governments had no attention to this criterion. Thus, funding health care program seems more acceptable and beneficial to some people.
On the contrary, the first aim of organizing art galleries and museums is to educate the young generation about the countries’ culture and history. Although it would be much more convenient for people to obtain information about these topics on the Internet; the experience of being in the presence of the objects would be more thrilled and realistic than from a plain screen. As well, another aim is that art galleries and museums would boost up the country's finance through tourism by arousing interest from not only locals but also foreigners. More tourists would be attracted to enjoy a huge collection of priceless national masterpieces. An illustration of this point would be a huge number of annual visitors who come to The Louvre Museum to witness the aesthetic appeal of French art.
To sum up, I agree that funding medical programs are essential to a country’s health, but I also believe that art galleries and museums would help educate young people about history and attract tourists to increase the country finance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 362, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...reate an efficient health care program. To illustrate this point, African countrie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, third, thus, well, in addition, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17094017094 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69128396702 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566951566952 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.1040538832 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.615384615 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198352994483 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794300666062 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375716148304 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134168175842 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287453117764 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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