It is true that, in this contemporary era, migration is being done from rural areas to urban areas by many individuals. However, sizeable majority of masses introspect that living in a cities are really fascinating instead of countryside. According to my perspective, city life is much better as compared to rural areas.
To commence with, people want to live or settle in cities because of outstanding amenities like, medical facilities, education, transportation, markets, advanced technologies and so on. Another reason could be, for getting jobs because in rural areas there are no more jobs available and facilities too. Moreover, they prefer to come in metropolitan cities for generating high income. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that more than 90% people in big cities are getting professional services in health sector and in others as well but it is not possible in rural areas.
Looking on the other view, staying in countryside has also overabundance of benefits. First and foremost, fresh air could be easily taken by us which is not possible in big cities because of air pollution. Secondly, we can spend our leisure time peacefully in villages due to less population. Furthermore, nobody can disturb us. Thirdly, people live with each other and endeavour to maintain good bonding but in cities people do not have much time to spend with their families.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly, rural areas have plethora of advantages like, peacefully life, no pollution yet, we must understand that metropolitan cities play an indispensable role in country's economy and high technologies, professional services are being gained by many people.
- Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time This can beneficial for teenagers and the community as well Do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60 it could cause problems Do you agree or disagree 56
- some people think that mobile phones are harmful to children while others disagree Discuss both the views and give your opinion 61
- Some people think that hard work helps in achieving Financial success while others think it is not the only thing which contributes to financial success Discuss both the views and give your opinion 61
- Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports Why is it Is it a positive or negative development 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a city' or simply 'cities'?
Suggestion: a city; cities
...ity of masses introspect that living in a cities are really fascinating instead of count...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, as to, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28624535316 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02731903201 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624535315985 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0651020818 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.384615385 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136261987254 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047136662252 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381557255954 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848226917417 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293210447382 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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