Many people now have personal computers, and the use of internet is becoming more widespread.Many people are concerned about children using internet to access adult websites, gamble or buy goods on credit.
How can internet access by children be controlled ?
In this day and age, the ownership of computers has substantially increased due to the wide distribution of Internet. For that reason, people can easily access to the network, including children. As a consequence, children can be affected by negative aspect of Internet such as pornographic sites, gambling or online shopping. This can be minimized by raise children awareness about negative aspect of Internet and monitoring children activities by using a range of software.
First of all, parents play an important role in this situation, they should allocate time to their children in order to educate them about the negative aspeccts of mentioned sites because that children have not fully grown up to regconise the danger of those websites, especially when there are many tricks to attract them. For instance, parents can easily show their kids the consequences of harmful websites in children mental and physical health such as a decrease in privacy, sexual addiction or scam.
Secondly, technology advances enable parents to supervise their kids at any time by installing monitoring software because the control of parents is dispensable to children activities, by overseeing children parents can timely deal with the circumstances when children access bad websites. For example, some of the companies as Youtube and Apple include tools in their foundation so that parents could restrict children’s access to some certain websites.
In conclusion, inspite of the developement of cyber crime parents can protect their children by raising the regconization of negative field of Internet and managing children activities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52589641434 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93659822738 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585657370518 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.175514795 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.111111111 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7777777778 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305769705984 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13990722142 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625169023037 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185441897421 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948541625314 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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