In any situation, progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The statement mentions that in any situation, hearing opposite thoughts will make progress. I agree with the prompt because hearing other's opinions will always make us to think about all outcome possibilities which can be beneficial.
First of all, when people hear about contrasting points, it is definitely going to open their minds even more. Thus, they can choose the best options or solutions to continue their goals. Imagine a student who is under pressure and is studying for GRE exam. He or she just thinks about getting high grades from analytical writing part without paying attention to his/her writing methods. After while she gets frustrated with writing and still not getting good scores in practice exams because she wants to write perfectly but she does not pay attention to the time restriction in exam. But when talks to one of her English professors, she figures it out that it is better to try to write even non perfect essay in thirty minutes and try to write better essays eventually by more and more practicing.
In addition, when people listen to the opposite views, they can be more experienced and knowledgeable person. Also, they can even improve their personalities. For example, an older boyfriend can advise her girlfriend that buying a very expensive dress is not necessary. Instead, she can buy two dresses by same amount of money. Thus, a girlfriend can make a better decision.
on the contrary, some people may believe that having discussions about contrasting view is wasting their times which can be true in some cases. For example, when a woman does not want to keep the baby whom created by rape, no contrasting views is going to stop her decision.
Surely people will benefit from hearing opposite views because it can open their minds to become a better decision maker.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, so, still, thus, while, for example, in addition, first of all, in some cases, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 305.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94754098361 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55952830914 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580327868852 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.771886588 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3125 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126304679708 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411911587777 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394716303279 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760428697033 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479474695303 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.