Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?
Recently, the trend is increasing that the people are order ready made food from restaurants, and don't like to cook at home. I think the main reason is that they deliver in cheap prices. This essay will discuss the positive and negative aspects ordering food from restaurant and homemade food.
On the one hand, ordering food is good opportunity for the busy persons who don't have have time to cook food at home and busy in work because cooking and at home requires alot of time and cleaning of crockery and also need some basic ingredients. For Example cooking a pasta at home requires requires many ingredients and microwave oven. Hence having an opportunity of ordering food via application saves alot of time and money.
On the other hand, there are many disadvantages of ordering ready made food it's not good for our health. If we eat on daily basis can cause severe infection in our digestive system and this can lead to cancer. For example Some restaurants have use poor quality of food and ingridients and sometimes chef use chemicals to have a better taste.
In conclusion, ordering food is a good option for those who don't have time for cooking , but after some time this practice can cause major health problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78403755869 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47081400094 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3069353199 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.9 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20155010201 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091851490964 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770189011267 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12553986561 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059808320928 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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