The maps show the changes of an office building between the present and the future.
The information about look of office at present and the plan for its future changes is illustrated in maps.
After having a glimpse it can be clearly seen that North east side grass will have been replaced by coffee machine in the upper side and meeting area in the southern side. In addition,now reception is located in the east side between office and grass but it will build middle in offices. Further more, kitchen and canteen will be demolished and where could be seen to new office.
Probing further,in present there is one big grass area which will become outdoor activity area in upcoming building. Moreover, stockroom will available at same location as present. However, washroom will have been totally removed.
In an overview, it is obvious that office building will change significantly, more inferstrueture will install such as meeting room, coffee machine and outdoor activity area.
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- Some people believe that all the company decisions should be taken by the managers whereas others think it is better to include employees while making decisions Discuss both the points and give your opinion 89
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- Many parents choose to think their children at home rather than sending their children to school do you think the benefits of homeschooling outweigh the drawbacks 56
- The maps show the changes of an office building between the present and the future 78
- Education of young people is a highly prioritised in many countries However educating adults who cannot read and write is even more important and government should spend more money on this To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , now
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16326530612 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58333277353 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65306122449 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0914183653 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.875 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181685924733 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836076726064 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085541282935 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129627340524 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073868204461 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.