In their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way Why is this Do you think it is a positive development or negative development

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In the era of globalisation, the daily n...
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...r newly-launched products. Personally, I believe an emphasis on the new element o...
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... is a relatively negative development. This kind of advertisement may st...
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...ing in a boost in the brand’s economy. However, the over-emphasis on the ...
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...e a negative impact on the public buyers . It is an inescapable fact that the acti...
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...esigns, some consumers can be misled and buy without consideration.Therefore, the...
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...e misled and buy without consideration.Therefore, they might have accidentally purchased...
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...dvantage of their consumption habits. In short, I contend that businesse...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, honestly, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, in short, kind of, such as, as well as, to a great extent

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52777777778 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49351490514 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598765432099 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1832703553 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.769230769 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221881276863 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734678692157 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454132221929 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133189409793 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287790164084 0.056905535591 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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