What are the advantages and disadvantages of our increasing use of computers?
In this day and age, computers occupy a pivotal role in the modern developed society that humans cannot deny. Using computers, however, has two dual aspects including positive and negative which has a huge impact in our life. Therefore, this essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of increasing use of this device.
On the one hand, computers accessed with the internet do a favor for people to broaden their horizon in a wide range of knowledge and convenience in communication as well as entertainment. In terms of treasure trove of data, despite the fact that this device is small, it can store a myriad of information in various fields which humans can make use of for their job or study. People are able to find out useful techniques or lessons of almost top-notch scientists and professionals all over the world. In addition, when people face numerous problems, with an internet-enabled computer, they can search their issues and this superb will give them a load of answers in a few seconds. When it comes to creation and communication, this modernized item is beneficial for humans. They are more likely to play online games and listen to music on these devices. Besides, communication between people from far distances has improved significantly. People can call and see their relatives in other countries every time and everywhere.
On the other hand, overusing computers is detrimental for human well-being and easy to lose private information. Firstly, people, especially the young, are inclined to spend many hours per day using computers which can lead to a sedentary life and affect their health and eyes. As a result, those are easy to obesity inasmuch as lack of outside activities and short-sighted. Furthermore, in recent years, the number of cybercrime is climbing drastically. Should people not be careful with confidential documents or information, they will be furtive. This information will be sold or published on social platforms such as Facebook or Twitter.
To sum up, humans need to be cautious with how to use and spend time reasonably with computers to become wise users.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11239193084 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93208370167 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605187319885 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4714077086 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5555555556 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2777777778 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61111111111 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131309919903 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373214987182 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426797708927 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950350435459 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487969691716 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.