Corporal punishment have been an ongoing debatable issue within society. Some people believe that physical force can be used as a purpose of control or correction, while others have argued that if it is used as a method of discipline, it can result in undesirable and even damaging consequences. This essay will discuss both views of people and provide my own overlook to this in a latter paragraph.
First and foremost, why physical force accepted is that it can change random behaviour into controlled ones. In other words, corporal punishment is effective in achieving immediate child compliance, but only in some cases. As a result of it children's behaviour change and it will be disciplined. For instance, in the growing process children can be more mobile and interested in playing the things that even harmful or dangerous to them. In this point the discipline is necessary as it is able to keep the children away from these things. Therefore, I believe that mild corporal punishment can be in necessity for those purposes.
However, physical punishment should be reinforced with teaching, firmness and reminders otherwise it will bring even damaging consequences to children's life. Aside from the fact that, it may lead to a child viewing punishment as an endorsement of aggression. In addition, corporal punishment may also arouse fellings of anger, counter-aggression and deep humiliation and child may develop unfeeling attitudes toward another person's pain. As if to exemplify, the research has shown that children who got much more physical force in their early life, would lost their confidence to themselves. Thus, it is not acceptable is some conditions.
I completely disagree to usage of corporal punishment as it has more negatives than positives.
All in all, I reiterate the idea that even though most people accepted the physical force, it should not be used as a disciple to children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1935483871 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96199302928 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554838709677 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2333783089 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.625 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270531926943 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081301972912 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042007481709 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134461402171 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059472337735 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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