Some people believe that all the company decisions should be taken by the managers whereas others think it is better to include employees while making decisions. Discuss both the points and give your opinion.
In this epoch, it is considered by some masses that decision taken by many managers in all companies ,however, other people believe that employees also include for making better settlement. According to me, managers are best to organise decision because they have high thinking rather than others. I will explain both views in following paragraphs.
On the one hand, There are some predominant factors which show that companies should be taken settlement by supervisor because they are able to make worthwhile decisions which can give profit to company. To explicate, principal‘s education is based on that work which they are doing as well as manager have an experience to tackle hinders for making any specific discussion and they aware about what day would be profitable for their company in the future. For instance, one survey was conducted by American government that 75% commitments are decided by comptrollers in companies. As a result, managers have critical thinking and they always take better decision.
On the other hand, why other people think that employees must involve for making decision? I’m not agree with this statement. To begin with, employers do not consider which determination is beneficial for them. To explain, mostly employees belong to middle-class families. They do not have greatest intelligence to give advice for creating conclusion due to lack of education as well as they do not understand properly about companies as compared with managers. Consequently, if employees participated to organise the settlement then it would be bad impact on business.
In conclusion, although companies have to need to good adviser to get beneficial decision but only managers play vital role in it rather than employees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...o include for making better settlement. According to me, managers are best to organise decision...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the greatest'.
Suggestion: have the greatest
...g to middle-class families. They do not have greatest intelligence to give advice for creatin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, then, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35144927536 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88098618366 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4083409522 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330261727762 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106239024027 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113880829525 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206307672301 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104313955724 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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