The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles

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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The diagram illustrates how to recycle the plastic bottles after that they are thrown away to the trash bins.
Overall, the procedure of recycling plastic bottles are comprised of nine stages which are rather simple.
The process begins when plastic bottles are thrown through the use of trash bins, which is followed by transporting through a truck. Sorting is carried out by employees after which is devided into two sorts. In the next stage, either the mixture is compressed into blocks through frames and bottles are crushed using two circled engines. Following that, the crushed plastics are washed in a certain level of water. The next stage involves a massive machine connected to a heating pallets to form raw material. The washed plastic are first produced plastic pellets before being exposed to heating. They are then sent to form raw material. Eventually, they are used to produce plastic dishes and bottles as well as for training tools.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e trash bins. Overall, the procedure of recycling plastic bottles are comprised ...
^^
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ixture is compressed into blocks through frames and bottles are crushed using two...
^^
Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'pallet'?
Suggestion: pallet
... massive machine connected to a heating pallets to form raw material. The washed plasti...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 660, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to producing'.
Suggestion: used to producing
...form raw material. Eventually, they are used to produce plastic dishes and bottles as well as f...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, well, as for, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07006369427 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37380596614 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1015325221 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277446711018 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102983162814 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891651879357 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210905689577 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355340896147 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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