More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
Cities are considered as places of opportunity, therefore an increasing number of people are in the hope of a better life when moving to a large metropolis. This essay will exchange views on major drawbacks of living in urban areas and some solutions that politicians could do to improve life’s city dwellers.
One of the main issues for the inhabitant when migrating to a large city is that the cost of living is likely to be much higher than in rural areas. The resident of cities has to pay higher prices for housing, transport, infrastructure, or even daily bread. Metropolitan regions may suffer from societal issues such as increased crime and poverty rates as a result of the inability to pay such fees. Another problem is the fact that the poor air quality is seriously increasing, due to the hazardous gar emissions and the traffic congestion occur daily. It could put people at a higher risk of respiratory illness like lung cancer, asthma attacks,.. therefore, city living could be unhealthy and unpleasant.
There are several actions that urban policymakers could implement to tackle these issues. Firstly, to bring down the cost of living, politicians can invest in the construction of affordable and social housing. The governments should develop public transportation at a reasonable price so that people can save money on travel. Secondly, politicians have the right to charge peak-hour tolls or a congestion fee, which would help to improve the environment and reduce traffic congestion. Finally, to reduce the pressure on major cities, the governments would expand economic growth, and industrial zones require more employees from rural regions. For instance, some individuals in metropolitan regions, as well as the majority of residents in rural areas and neighboring towns, now have work thanks to Nhan Hoi Industrial Park, as a results curb of concentrating in the city to work.
In conclusion, to enhance the quality of life’s city residents, the governments could do more with a range of measures outlined above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1752265861 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9249581378 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589123867069 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.812672466 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.2 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303867749644 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088559563658 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749491486757 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187652506623 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625707605964 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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