In current era, due to sophisticated Technologies various sources of study become in their presence, majority of people claim that in future nobody will purchase printer books or newspaper because of online availability of contain in free of cost. I totally disagree with this statement and I will celebrate my reason behind this in forthcoming paragraph.
Firstly, future is uncertain but as far as we concerned the upcoming time. will more advanced rather than current. They are numerous website which provide reading material in forms of news and books to consumers but there is no any legislation about given content it is wrong or true. Moreover, maturity of masses content for electronic devices such as smartphone laptop by ensuring internet connectivity and this instrument emmits harmful rays which may directly affect the eyes of reader.
In addition to this, for obtaining knowledge printer form of newspaper and books are not reliable than online content because the books are wroted by experts and professional writers of particular field. Furthermore, every person will not be able to purchase expensive electronic items like as personal computer for online study and in remote areas of any Nation proper or availability of internet is not possible in future as well. In such kind of region printed books are the only source for gaining exposure or for study purpose. last but not least, print industry also provide marks if a probability to youngster but E-commerce websites not.
To sum up, Printed form of books and newspaper always remain in their presence. This industry cannot demolished by any sophistication of Technology because every person have more faith on printed content as compared to online.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Will
... far as we concerned the upcoming time. will more advanced rather than current. They...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ews and books to consumers but there is no any legislation about given content it ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
... gaining exposure or for study purpose. last but not least, print industry also prov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, in addition, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23104693141 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76116414238 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606498194946 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5695146507 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.75 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153805468038 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554320272131 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346128673967 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960912558236 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279630071877 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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