You planned to throw a surprise party for your father on his 60th birthday.
Write a letter to your aunt, in your letter, write-
• Invite her to the surprise party
• Explain why this party means a lot to you
• Say what you want to bring with her
Dear Nita Aunty,
Hope this letter finds you in a good health.I am planning to throw a surprise birthday party for my father this time.It will be indeed a special one because this is his 60th birthday.I am writing this to invite you for the same on 10th August,2021;a day in advance.
There have been many ups and downs during last one year.He had a fracture a year ago on his hand, so could not celebrate his birthday.Also,my cousin Eesha,who is your daughter had her board exams in the same year.Because of that,you could not come to meet us.I am very glad to know that she cleared it well with a high score.
Also,this year dad is getting retired exactly two days before his birthday.So overall,it will be a grand celebration and that is the reason this party means a lot to me.
He is fond of branded watches and the watch that he likes the most is not available at present.So I want you to gift him his favourite "Rolex" watch on this occasion.
Looking forward to meet all of you soon.
Best Regards,
Nishika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Nita Aunty, Hope this letter finds you in a good hea...
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... this letter finds you in a good health.I am planning to throw a surprise birthda...
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Suggestion: It
... birthday party for my father this time.It will be indeed a special one because th...
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Suggestion: I
...l one because this is his 60th birthday.I am writing this to invite you for the s...
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Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'August 2021'.
Suggestion: August 2021
...this to invite you for the same on 10th August,2021;a day in advance. There have been man...
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...many ups and downs during last one year.He had a fracture a year ago on his hand, ...
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Suggestion: Also
...nd, so could not celebrate his birthday.Also,my cousin Eesha,who is your daughter ha...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , my
...so could not celebrate his birthday.Also,my cousin Eesha,who is your daughter had h...
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Suggestion: , who
...ebrate his birthday.Also,my cousin Eesha,who is your daughter had her board exams in...
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Suggestion: Because
...er had her board exams in the same year.Because of that,you could not come to meet us.I...
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...d exams in the same year.Because of that,you could not come to meet us.I am very gla...
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...e of that,you could not come to meet us.I am very glad to know that she cleared i...
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...cleared it well with a high score. Also,this year dad is getting retired exactly two...
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Suggestion: So
...ed exactly two days before his birthday.So overall,it will be a grand celebration ...
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... two days before his birthday.So overall,it will be a grand celebration and that is...
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...es the most is not available at present.So I want you to gift him his favourite &a...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...tch on this occasion. Looking forward to meet all of you soon. Best Regards, Nish...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to meet all of you soon. Best Regards, Nishika
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55376344086 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69249652159 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677419354839 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 16.3608247423 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.224106145 44.8134815571 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.166666667 76.5299724578 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 16.8248392259 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 2.54639175258 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32696509167 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120121231975 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103063416054 0.0603063233224 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146476175908 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100943519494 0.0580467560999 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 8.37731958763 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 8.62886597938 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 8.54432989691 169% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.