If a product is good or it meets people needs, people will buy it. So advertising is unnecessary and no more than an entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is indeed true that if product is good and it covers all the requirements of customers then they will definitely buy that product without seeing the advertisement. However, I believe that advertisement is essential part for marketing of products.
Regarding to those who believe that advertisement of product is nothing more than an entertainment when customers find the right product for them without seeing it. They say that if product is best and if it has every quality and facilities which consumers want in the product then they will purchase it so there is no need of advertisement and it only remain the part of time-pass nothing more.
In contrast, I believe that if the customer will see the ad of any products then they can gain more knowledge about that and also they can choose right product from multiple products and also they can understand the pros and cons of that product. For instance, if a person wants to buy a college bag with some basic facilities and then he/she watch the advertisement of skybags company which provide more facilities as compare to that bag which he/she is going to buy and they can easily differentiate the difference between them and choose the right product for them. There are many advertisements runs from the governments for public to show their new skims, which they starts for citizens. By seeing these type of adverts people can also take advantage of that skims.
In conclusion, although individuals can buy product directly from the market without seeing advertisements, if they see adverts then they can choose the best product from them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'remains'?
Suggestion: remains
...is no need of advertisement and it only remain the part of time-pass nothing more. ...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...dge about that and also they can choose right product from multiple products and also...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'watches'.
Suggestion: watches
...h some basic facilities and then he/she watch the advertisement of skybags company wh...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 673, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'start'
Suggestion: start
...lic to show their new skims, which they starts for citizens. By seeing these type of a...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95555555556 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77788641763 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485185185185 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.9302556373 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.666666667 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197545801306 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945520464775 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542446470485 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13789750722 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666970115265 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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