Because of the global economy. Many goods including what we use as daily basis products by other countries have to be transported for a long distance to what extent do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage.
Globalization has revolutionized our world in many aspects. Now we do not belong to a big planet earth we belong to a small global village. Everything is available everywhere. There are many behoves and adverse effects of transporting goods over a long distance. I delineate my justification to describe that the pros outweigh the cons in further segments before reaching at a critique conclusion.
On the positive side, transporting goods over a long distance gives us a lot of alternatives. We can taste a variety of foods and vegetables from all parts of the world. To site an example about ten years ago we hardly saw the kiwi fruit which is from new zeland. But now, it has a place on every fruit stand. Earlier we had very few shoe brands like bata and carona ,but now the market is flooded with Reeboks, Nike, addidas and other foreigner brands. Secondly many people get employment in the import and export field. Small businesses have a change to expand globally and it increases the overall economy of the country finally it helps in developing good relations between nations, which helps in international cooperation and peace. If countries are dependent upon one another for economic success , then they would not go against each other.
On the other hand, importing goods can have a negative effect on local culture. This can be seen in countries such as India where imported food has become more popular than traditional, local products, eroding people's understanding of their own food tradition. For instance, Indians used to give a lot of importance to the family meal. Wherein all the members set around the table and conversed with each other over dinner, but the young generation is going for fast foods and prefer to eat alone. Secondly, other diversity is being lost and everyone is wearing similar clothes, eating similar food, watching same TV programs and listening to same music. This is making the world dull and boring another major detrimental influence is pollution. When goods are traded thousands of miles by roads, sea and air, it increases pollution from exhaust fumes.
To putt in nut shell, importing goods has both marits and demerits but the benefits outweigh the potential shortcomings steaming out from this trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, second, secondly, then, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01861702128 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70553908548 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656914893617 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7315939456 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8571428571 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9047619048 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90476190476 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229531967582 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569861193108 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424373474033 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124009063897 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511720831228 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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